Before the first gleam of dawn touches the earth
Before the koels start their morning mirth
Give me all that is you and fill your dearth
Fill your dearth before my eternity ends
Fill it only with you until my heart rends
For you’re the drug with which it mends
That's very romantic indeed
ReplyDeleteLove is strange-the tormentor
has the power to heal!
Simple & Sweet :)
ReplyDelete@Latha: Oh...yes!!! It's strange in all strange ways! :)
ReplyDelete@Aj: Thanks buddy!!! ^_^
ReplyDeleteI'm not really into poetry, but just wondering, why let it rend, if you want it to mend? I'm only half-serious :)
ReplyDelete@Vamsee: I am glad u asked... it's like u fill it full to the extent that it rends... but it's ok if it rends cos it'll mend by itself with wat is filled ;) [i am kinda half0serious too ;)]
ReplyDeleteWell written.. you will reach places in blogging(poetic)
ReplyDelete@Vasir: Thanks a lot! ^_^
ReplyDeletemy mind swirl..
ReplyDeleterobot to roses!!
this one is so nice..
especially the DRUG!!
@Arvind: Thanks :)
ReplyDeleteThe last line takes away everything, the last line is awesome! :-)
ReplyDelete@Neha: Thanks dear :)
ReplyDeleteSigh!
ReplyDelete@Leks: why sigh? :)
ReplyDeleteooi... was the last line impressed by twilight?? ;) nice...!! :)
ReplyDelete@DD: Did Bella tell tat to Edward ?!?! don tell me!!! :)
ReplyDeleteNope... Edward to bella... :)
ReplyDelete@DD:Nooo.... (oki.. looks like Edward read my mind!!! ;)) and damn i wish i get a drug like tat! :)
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