The world stood still as you slept
I kept watching you wondering how the night leapt
As the sun rose, I brought my face to yours, close
Was that your cheeks or the petals of a rose?
A wisp of my hair landed on your cheek
Damn that woke you up with an eek!
Hope that moment lasted longer
Curse that wisp of the kisser!
will u stop writing about cats... hmmmmmmmm!
ReplyDeletelol.. :)
@Tum: Ada paavi... Why do u always twist the meaning of my poem? grrrr.... anyway thanks :) :P
ReplyDeleteOop Nicee :) Romantic eh :)
ReplyDelete@Sammy: ^_^ Romantic eh? Tnx! :)
ReplyDeleteawww... its a ore subtle romance.. so nice.. simple though touchy!! ;)
ReplyDelete@DD: Thanks Dear :)
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ReplyDeleteOh.. its not about cat then.... r u normal? :P
ReplyDeletegrrr.... no am abnormal!
ReplyDeleteit happened like a motion picture, just before my eyes.. :) though I am staying off mushy stuff these days, must stay..Very Romantic !
ReplyDelete@Wild: Thank you sooo much. ^_^
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