“The first drop of dew dribbled from the lush green leaf, the sun gave a warm smile and woke me up with its tickling rays. I woke up sluggishly only to see you lying beside me like a baby. I kissed you gently on your brow and watched your lips turning to a bow.”
How beautiful every dawn would be, if this happens every day!
As always... Very well written :) I can see the care n affections of urs.
ReplyDeleteBy the way... i guess the one sleeping next to u got four legs. right? ;)
You are right karr... but he always has a smile on his face not jus in the mornings!!! :)
ReplyDeleteYes, that's called unbridled love and only they are capable of such joy and affection.
ReplyDeleteYou have set a nice platform, now go on to build it. Go complete it, give it a fullness with words from your world.
@OMG: Thank Youuu Hariiiii!!!
ReplyDeleteThe first time I read it I felt it so romantic!! But later reading Tumaini's comment me finding it affectionate!! Way to go de ma!! full of feelings!!
ReplyDelete@Das: Thanks da...Tumaini was actually tryin to tease me but as of now.. ya tatz the truth! ;)
ReplyDeleteShort and sweet-very nice
ReplyDelete@Latha: Thanks :)
ReplyDeleteone might lay near by;
ReplyDeletejust watched u and might say
"just watch u for so long -
how beautiful u - at ur sleep.."
enjoy the sun..
if the earth allows - it can accompany u daily..
@Arvind: I din quite get what you are tryin to say... anyway thank!!! :)
ReplyDeleteDear Rain Crab ..such a beautiful name...i almost feel moist in the monsoon just pronouncing it...thanks for visiting my blog and leaving a comment...good blog..take care and thanks once more
ReplyDelete@Flying High: Thanks a lot! :)
ReplyDeleteI awww'd at this! How cute!
ReplyDeletePS: First time. Hello!
@Blogger Mouth: Thanks a lot!!! and Hello!!!
ReplyDeleteUntil I read Tumaini comment I never thought it would be Snowy... Romantic..
ReplyDelete@Vasir: It's a poem... not really written for anyone in particular!
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