Wednesday, March 10, 2010

Hush! I am a Daffodil

I walked through a sea of daffodils that carpeted a range of mountain hills

The wind swayed a petal that landed on my hand very subtle

It hissed in to my ears “Listen to my tears

Dear woman, I was born in a happy plant with no big clamant

I budded with my fellow daffs with all fun and laughs

When I was about to bloom my mom said never gloom for I will depart to glorify a stranger’s room

The time came to depart, but I left just a part, my heart

Tell me woman, are we not common?”

I retorted with a smile…

Yes dear daffodil, we come from a beautiful valley of love

From there we part leaving behind our heart

But dear daffodil wherever we go…

We spread the joy and happiness until we leave the stranger in loneliness!

We have things in common, we are common, and we are women!

Posted by The Rain Crab at 9:00 PM
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19 comments:

  1. OMGMarch 11, 2010

    Dabbling into poetry, Varsh. Excellent start!

    A wonderful ode to women. Masked behind the bright cherfulness is the untold pain. But so much joy to give and so much happiness to spread. Long live your breed.

    Hari

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  2. The Rain CrabMarch 11, 2010

    Thanks HARI!!! :)

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  3. SammYMarch 11, 2010

    Awesome one :),.. So Wats the flip side of THESE Daffodils?????? Try writin on the New gen gals :),.. Show strengths in ur poems!!!!!! Say u guys are not always soft n gentle n sacrificin,.... Write somethin Kick Ass:) Show some power,.. Afta all u wrote it for Womens day!!!!!!!!

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  4. The Rain CrabMarch 11, 2010

    he he.. wait for it smoke!!!

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  5. Latha NairMarch 11, 2010

    Liked the undertones of pathos
    in the lines. Keep going!!

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  6. The Rain CrabMarch 11, 2010

    @Lostsoul: Thank you!!! :)

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  7. TumainiMarch 11, 2010

    Inspiring poem... n as always i'm inspired this time too... :)

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  8. The Rain CrabMarch 11, 2010

    @Tumaini: Thanks a lot!!! :)

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  9. VyadhiMarch 12, 2010

    OMG! It is awesome varshaaaaaaaaaa!! very inspiring!

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  10. The Rain CrabMarch 12, 2010

    @DD: Thank you soo much dear :)

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  11. wildflowerMarch 12, 2010

    Good one..! :)

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  12. The Rain CrabMarch 13, 2010

    @Wildflower: Thank you! :)

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  13. humanobserverMarch 15, 2010

    I accepted what you have written here. :) To your question on my blog, it is not multiple exposure. I just created it through Photoscape, a kind of phostoshop.

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  14. UntitledMarch 15, 2010

    very nice..i dint know you write so well..

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  15. The Rain CrabMarch 15, 2010

    @humanobserver: Gracious! ;)
    Alright.. i will check out that application now :)

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  16. The Rain CrabMarch 15, 2010

    @Beat99: Thanks!!! sometimes mistakes happen ;)

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  17. UntitledMarch 17, 2010

    mistakes are beautiful..

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  18. arvindMarch 17, 2010

    me the stranger..
    and always lonely..
    the beautiful flower came in my life..
    and made it so cheerful..
    now left..
    me feel the deepest of my lonliness..

    me will not crumble like the pedal..
    that too part of the life..
    (very nice feel of urs..)

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  19. The Rain CrabMarch 18, 2010

    @Arvind: Thanks!

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