Monday, March 22, 2010

Every Morning.....

“The first drop of dew dribbled from the lush green leaf, the sun gave a warm smile and woke me up with its tickling rays. I woke up sluggishly only to see you lying beside me like a baby. I kissed you gently on your brow and watched your lips turning to a bow.”

How beautiful every dawn would be, if this happens every day!

16 comments:

  1. As always... Very well written :) I can see the care n affections of urs.

    By the way... i guess the one sleeping next to u got four legs. right? ;)

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  2. You are right karr... but he always has a smile on his face not jus in the mornings!!! :)

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  3. Yes, that's called unbridled love and only they are capable of such joy and affection.

    You have set a nice platform, now go on to build it. Go complete it, give it a fullness with words from your world.

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  4. @OMG: Thank Youuu Hariiiii!!!

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  5. The first time I read it I felt it so romantic!! But later reading Tumaini's comment me finding it affectionate!! Way to go de ma!! full of feelings!!

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  6. @Das: Thanks da...Tumaini was actually tryin to tease me but as of now.. ya tatz the truth! ;)

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  7. Short and sweet-very nice

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  8. one might lay near by;

    just watched u and might say


    "just watch u for so long -

    how beautiful u - at ur sleep.."

    enjoy the sun..
    if the earth allows - it can accompany u daily..

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  9. @Arvind: I din quite get what you are tryin to say... anyway thank!!! :)

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  10. Dear Rain Crab ..such a beautiful name...i almost feel moist in the monsoon just pronouncing it...thanks for visiting my blog and leaving a comment...good blog..take care and thanks once more

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  11. @Flying High: Thanks a lot! :)

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  12. I awww'd at this! How cute!

    PS: First time. Hello!

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  13. @Blogger Mouth: Thanks a lot!!! and Hello!!!

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  14. Until I read Tumaini comment I never thought it would be Snowy... Romantic..

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  15. @Vasir: It's a poem... not really written for anyone in particular!

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