Wednesday, July 14, 2010

I Hate To Wake You Up

The world stood still as you slept

I kept watching you wondering how the night leapt

As the sun rose, I brought my face to yours, close

Was that your cheeks or the petals of a rose?

A wisp of my hair landed on your cheek

Damn that woke you up with an eek!

Hope that moment lasted longer

Curse that wisp of the kisser!

11 comments:

  1. will u stop writing about cats... hmmmmmmmm!

    lol.. :)

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  2. @Tum: Ada paavi... Why do u always twist the meaning of my poem? grrrr.... anyway thanks :) :P

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  3. Oop Nicee :) Romantic eh :)

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  4. @Sammy: ^_^ Romantic eh? Tnx! :)

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  5. awww... its a ore subtle romance.. so nice.. simple though touchy!! ;)

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  7. Oh.. its not about cat then.... r u normal? :P

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  8. it happened like a motion picture, just before my eyes.. :) though I am staying off mushy stuff these days, must stay..Very Romantic !

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  9. @Wild: Thank you sooo much. ^_^

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