Tuesday, June 8, 2010

Dearth

Before the first gleam of dawn touches the earth

Before the koels start their morning mirth

Give me all that is you and fill your dearth

Fill your dearth before my eternity ends

Fill it only with you until my heart rends

For you’re the drug with which it mends


18 comments:

  1. That's very romantic indeed
    Love is strange-the tormentor
    has the power to heal!

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  2. @Latha: Oh...yes!!! It's strange in all strange ways! :)

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  3. I'm not really into poetry, but just wondering, why let it rend, if you want it to mend? I'm only half-serious :)

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  4. @Vamsee: I am glad u asked... it's like u fill it full to the extent that it rends... but it's ok if it rends cos it'll mend by itself with wat is filled ;) [i am kinda half0serious too ;)]

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  5. Well written.. you will reach places in blogging(poetic)

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  6. @Vasir: Thanks a lot! ^_^

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  7. my mind swirl..
    robot to roses!!
    this one is so nice..
    especially the DRUG!!

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  8. The last line takes away everything, the last line is awesome! :-)

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  9. ooi... was the last line impressed by twilight?? ;) nice...!! :)

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  10. @DD: Did Bella tell tat to Edward ?!?! don tell me!!! :)

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  11. Nope... Edward to bella... :)

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  12. @DD:Nooo.... (oki.. looks like Edward read my mind!!! ;)) and damn i wish i get a drug like tat! :)

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